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Sunday, June 27, 2010

My Story

So this is a Story I'm Going to post Chapter by Chapter.

So I wanted to Post a Story I've Been Righting Chapter By Chapter here on my Blog.

Protector of My People
Chapter 1

My Name is Athonia Second Daughter of Theopulis the Black Smith and his Wife Angethia When I was Seven years Old My older Brother Otheus ( O-they-us ) was drafted into the Roman Empire Soldiers when he left he told me " Athon You are my little Light in the Darkness Remember Nothing is worth doing if you do not put your heart into it " I Carried the words with me .

Our Brave Leader Onthienas ( On-they-en-as) had been Defeated by the Romans but they Let him live on one Condition all the Sons of Othenians would become Soldiers for the Roman Empire! my Hatred for the Romans only Grew worse They took away Every boy of fifteen to nineteen they thought we belonged to them Our leader just Watched as they were taken .

Otheus my brother who had been my Friend and my Parents comfort was brave along with all the others I cried for him Openly .

"Otheus Otheus Please Don't go " I cried tears ran down my cheeks Otheus Moved towards me but was knocked down by a Roman.

"NO!!" I screamed, I picked up a Rock and threw it at the Soldier it hit him in the Back of the Head knocking him out.

"Athonia Run " said My Brother and Run I did Into the forest until I couldn't here anything of my Village I felt anger ,Grief and relief all at once my Life was now as an Out-Law I couldn't go back into the Village Unless I wanted to be Killed so for Years I stayed in the Forest Eating Rabbit and Any other Animal I could Find and sleeping under the stars.

I Never would go back unless they Really needed me My Dreams were about my Brother and my Parents I would wake up and be Crying but no one knew were I was I knew it.

I Lost track of Time when I turned Seventeen I saw a Human Being for the First time since I had run away.

"Who's there " I called the Rags I wore as clothing swishing around me

"Athonia? is that you? " Came a Voice

"Who are you "

"Athonia Its me Theopulisis I Thought you were Dead " and it was Him My old Friend from the Village my old Life came Back to me .

"How are my Mother and Father ? " I asked Looking him in the Eyes.

"There Dead they died five years ago "

something heavy settled into my Stomach I felt like Crying .

2 comments:

Ivania said...

So, what is this Galahiel?

Juniper said...

this is pretty much a review/story/Poem Blog :)